What u think of my St. Patricks essay?
Question by Chick Magnet: What u think of my St. Patricks essay?
Am i including the following:
color green
four leaf clover
Leprechuan and his pot of gold
St. Patty’s Day Parade
compound sent.
complex sent.
transistion words
oh and are there any spelling/grammer mistakes…
In 390 Patricius Daorbae (St. Patrick) was born to . When he was 16 he was captured by Irish raiders. They brought him from his home to Ireland where they only worshiped the druids. He was a shepherd by day and a slave chained to a wall at night. Not far from the pasture that we worked in there was a family. He made friends with them. They also helped him escape from Ireland. Once he returned to his home in Wales he had a nightmare. He dreamed on how the Irish raiders made the people bow down to the druids. When Patrick woke up he knew what to do, he would become a priest to spread the faith- in Ireland. Once he became a priest he traveled back to Ireland. The king would let him teach about his God where ever he wanted, but he had to win a contest. The contest was between the Druid’s God and Patrick’s God. The Druids saw a storm coming so they pretended to ask their God for thunder, lighting and rain. Now it was Patrick’s turn he picked up a 3 leaf clover and said a prayer then in a matter of seconds the clouds disappeared and the sun shined again. So since Patrick won the contest he got to teach about his God where he wanted.
Once Patrick had died (in 460) he was buried like everyone single priest was, but what was different was that when the funeral was over the cross that he had always carried on his neck, which was nailed to the coffin suddenly changed form and from it a portal of some kind emerged. From this portal little men (who would latter be called leprechauns) emerged. They ran around like ants. Once every single leprechaun had exited from the portal they all started making a town. Some witnesses of this construction said “There only material was cobbler.” Every thing was made from it. “They were also making shoes” said another witness. There were also some playing pranks on one another. Once the clock struck 12 for the start of May 17 they dropped everything they were doing and ran into there houses grabbing their gold and running up the hill and down it. There was someone watching while they did this so when they were not looking he dug a hole and a few more came and 1 fell in the hole. Once the others had left he ran to get them, no one knows what happened after this but all they knew was that the farmer was no longer a poor farmer he was a rich man arriving to town on horses and not foot. They also knew that in the morning there was a big rainbow and a few people who were returning from a picnic were rich, they clamed to have found a huge pile of gold at the end of it. Soon a legend started: that every May 17 the leprechauns would run with their gold and try to hide it. Only a few people are lucky to catch them and once they do they are really rich. But a few people were just happy with finding a four leaf clover. According to legend, each leaflet represents something: the first is for hope, the second is for faith, the third is for love, and the fourth is for luck. Another Irish legend tells that the three leaf clover, or “Shamrock”, was what Saint Patrick used to represent the Holy Trinity. The name “four-leaf clover” is a misnomer: the clover leaf actually consists of three leaflets.
Saint Patrick’s Day is an annual feast day which celebrates Saint Patrick one of the patron saints of Ireland, and is generally celebrated on March 17. The day is the national holiday of Ireland. It is a bank holiday in Northern Ireland and a public holiday in the Republic of Ireland and Montserrat. In Canada, Great Britain, Australia, the United States, and New Zealand. Saint Patrick’s Day is celebrated worldwide by those of Irish descent and increasingly by non-Irish people (usually in New Zealand, Australia, and North America). Celebrations are generally themed around all things Irish and, by association, the color green. Both Christians and non-Christians celebrate the secular version of the holiday by wearing green, eating Irish food and/or green foods, imbibing Irish drink (such as Irish stout, Irish Whiskey or Irish Cream) and attending parades. The parade is called the St. Patricks Day Parade. It takes place all over the globe. Many people also set traps on hoping to catch a leprechaun, but how ever you spend your day remember that everybody’s Irish on May 17.
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Answer by oldretiredfart
i quit counting after finding elev mistakes
example” yur first sentence make no cents. did yu leave out the name of his parent. why do yu not capitiliz DRUID all the time
there vs their vs they’re
what happens in canada, gb, australia, and usa?
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