Q&A: I AM 13- do you like my travel writing?
Question by Yasmin Cripps: I AM 13- do you like my travel writing?
first 3 paragraphs of my travel writing=
Four hours flew by, and before long the sun was striking my eyes with its blinding white light, as it danced high above the clouds; blowing 100 degree heat into the air around me. Sunglasses on, I gazed down in complete awe through the adjacent windows, and hundreds of miles of luscious turquoise Mediterranean sea,(which outlined the border of a whole new country between Europe and Asia ), smiled back at me. Minutes quickly passed, and soon we were above land: beneath us were dark gold fields exploding with crops, and steep imposing mountains stretched out as far as the eye could see. In the distance, the monstrous ,snowy peak of Mount Babadağ sawed high above the others; as it was over 4,593 ft tall.
As the plane rapidly dropped lower, the tiny details on the ground became indisputable, additionally, what before had resembled a frenzied colony of ants, soon became an evident bustle of uncontrolled, vivacious vehicles; that seemed to be driving manically without any sensible formation! Post our landing, the pilot made his speech-“Thank you everyone for flying with British Airways, we have landed at our destination of Dalaman airport, Turkey – where the local time is 6:00pm, two hours ahead of your accustomed British time, we hope you enjoy your holiday.”
As my taxi driver drove us away from the most expensive airport in the world, into a sea of thick green forestation, and staggered mountain roads, the luscious natural beauty gradually unveiled as we covered every inch of south west Turkey. However, cars and lorries overtaking one another seemed to be ‘the norm’, and during that rather unfortunate journey, death would linger tantalizingly around the wheels of the taxi, nearly thrusting us all off of 1000 ft precipices as we climbed vigorously along steep, sinister mountain edges.
The entire travelling world around me seemed to be intoxicated with alcohol, but it was highly unlikely since 99.9% of Turkish nationals are strict Muslims!
HOW COULD I IMPROVE IT??
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Answer by C.Y
Yes! Very interesting.
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Its ok!! Very interesting:)