Help!! Hurry !! Can anyone correct the two paragraphs?
Question by goby: Help!! Hurry !! Can anyone correct the two paragraphs?
I am a Chinese student. I will take a English exam tomorrow, but my teacher can not help me to correct the final four paragraphs . Can anynoe help me? (just 150-180 words per paragraphs) Thanks a lot
3)smoking
During this decade, cancer is always the first cause of death and lung cancer is the first of most prevalence cancer in the world. Many medical researches had proved that smoking is the major cause of lung cancer. According to statistics data, there are 80% lung cancer patient are smokers. The more serious is that over 85% patient of a major subtype of lung cancer, adenocarcinoma, are non-smoking females. Exception of kitchen smoke, the second-hand smoking is the major cause of lung cancer. According to the World Health Organization non-smoking environments and high tobacco prices are two most effective measures to reduce tobacco consumption and smoking among young people. A 1999 World Band report stated that when the price of tobacco is raised by 10 percent, consumption decrease by 4 to 8 percent. Because of this, the U.S., such as Mayor Bloomberg and Bill Gates will work together on a 0 million campaign to stop smoking in Asia and Afica.
The new tobacco Hazard Prevention Act amendment takes effect in Taiwan on January 11, 2009. Smoking will be banned in many indoor such as KTV, Bowling alley, cyber cafe, passenger waiting room. Train station platform, though an outdoor area, was included in the ban for being a part of the train station. Smoking indoor working areas with over three people is also banned. Once being reported, violators can be fined NT00 to NT000. Owners who do not put up signs will be fined NT000 to NT000. A no –smoking sign should be put up at the entrance of every smoke free place. The anit-smoking foundation spokesman, Suan Yuao, said it is difficult to promote the smoking free environment in Taiwan. With the new tobacco hazard prevention act take effect in Taiwan, we hope that the number of smokers and the amount of tobacco consumption will decrease to make a smoke-free environment.
(4)Chinese New Year
Chinese New Year
Chinese New Year and spring festival is the most important of the traditional Chinese holidays. It is also the most special holiday different from western countries. According to tales and legends, the beginning of Chinese New Year started with the fight against a mythical beast called the Nian. People used firecracks to frighten the Nian and from then on , the Nian never came to village again.
The festival traditionally begins on the first day of the first lunar month in Chinese calendar and ends on the 15th. On the day before the new year my family always give our home a through cleaning to sweep away the bad luck of last year. At the eve of Chinese New Year, my uncle’s family, aunt’s family and my family will eat dinner including fish and new year cake together in my home to celebrate the coming of New Year. The first day of the new year, my brother and I will get the red packets containing cash from my parents and we always buy the firecrackers and set off these in the park. During the second day of the new year, my family always go to my grandmother’s home and eat lunch with her.
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Answer by Shawn X
3)smoking
During this decade, Cancer is the leading cause of death and lung cancer is the most prevalent cancer in the world. Many medical researches have proven that smoking is the major cause of lung cancer. According to statistics data, 80% of lung cancer patients are smokers. 85% of patients of a major subtype of lung cancer, adenocarcinoma, are non-smoking females. With the exception of kitchen smoke, Second-hand smoke is a major cause of lung cancer in non-smokers. According to the World Health Organization non-smoking environments and high tobacco prices are two most effective measures to reduce tobacco consumption and smoking among young people. A 1999 World Band report stated that when the price of tobacco is raised by 10 percent, consumption decrease by 4 to 8 percent. Because of this, the U.S., such as Mayor Bloomberg and Bill Gates will work together on a 0 million campaign to stop smoking in Asia and Afica.
The new tobacco Hazard Prevention Act amendment takes effect in Taiwan on January 11, 2009. Smoking will be banned in many indoor areas such as KTV, Bowling alleys, Cyber cafes, passenger waiting rooms, and Train station platforms. Even an outdoor area was included in the ban for being a part of the train station. Indoor working areas with over three people are also banned from smoking. Once being reported, violators can be fined NT00 to NT000. Owners who do not put up signs will be fined NT000 to NT000. A no –smoking sign should be put up at the entrance of every smoke free place. The anti-smoking foundation spokesman, Suan Yuao, said it is difficult to promote the smoke free environment in Taiwan. With the new tobacco hazard prevention act take effect in Taiwan, we hope that the number of smokers and the amount of tobacco consumption will decrease to make a smoke-free environment.
(4)Chinese New Year
Chinese New Year and Spring Festival are the most important of the traditional Chinese holidays. They are special holidays uniquely different from western countries. According to tales and legends, the beginning of Chinese New Year started with the fight against a mythical beast called the Nian. People used firecrackers to frighten the Nian and from then on, the Nian never came to the village again.
The festival traditionally begins on the first day of the first lunar month in Chinese calendar and ends on the 15th. On the day before the New Year my family always gives our home a through cleaning to sweep away the bad luck of last year. At the eve of Chinese New Year, my uncle’s family, aunt’s family, and my family will eat dinner including fish and a cake together in my home to celebrate the coming of New Year. The first day of the new year, my brother and I will get red packets containing cash from my parents and we always buy the firecrackers and set them off in the park. During the second day of the New Year, my family always go to my grandmother’s home to eat lunch with her and celebrate.
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